oh my god the tension!!! i adore what you're doing with this tale. i adored the first version, but it sings even more beautifully now. gorgeous to see your writing hitting new levels ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
Oh wow, I had to read this twice. Captured by the narrative, picturing the room, the scene, the sounds in my mind. And of course, you leave the reader wanting more. 😎
Such an interesting tale full of images, anticipation, things known and yet unspoken. Hidden truths that will be revealed...or will they just become known. And the lust. the tale just drips with it.
There is a completely different feel to this one, a lot of lead up and a sense of dread. Its all very organized now with the rituals and the history. It blurred the lines of who she's actually jealous over in a really intriguing way. I feel like I'm on the edge of a knife point by the end, just a breath from tipping over.
Oh my god, I love this. Part 3 when?
Tomorrow darling 💋
oh my god the tension!!! i adore what you're doing with this tale. i adored the first version, but it sings even more beautifully now. gorgeous to see your writing hitting new levels ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
Thank you darling you have been with me from the beginning so this means the world to me 💋
🖤🖤🖤
Nice anticipation. You know what's coming, and you race to get there, but the episode ends, leaving you wanting...
Part III is all yours on Thursday SJ x
Oh wow, I had to read this twice. Captured by the narrative, picturing the room, the scene, the sounds in my mind. And of course, you leave the reader wanting more. 😎
I'm just finishing up part III 💋
Such an interesting tale full of images, anticipation, things known and yet unspoken. Hidden truths that will be revealed...or will they just become known. And the lust. the tale just drips with it.
So yummy 😋
🔥 🥵 ❤️
Part III will be explosive 💦😜
There is a completely different feel to this one, a lot of lead up and a sense of dread. Its all very organized now with the rituals and the history. It blurred the lines of who she's actually jealous over in a really intriguing way. I feel like I'm on the edge of a knife point by the end, just a breath from tipping over.
Oooh GOOD 🔥 it should be a very fun part three ... X
I absolutely LOVE and adore the filth you create, Kate. ❤️Paul