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There is a completely different feel to this one, a lot of lead up and a sense of dread. Its all very organized now with the rituals and the history. It blurred the lines of who she's actually jealous over in a really intriguing way. I feel like I'm on the edge of a knife point by the end, just a breath from tipping over.

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Oh my god, I love this. Part 3 when?

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