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Demetria Balfour's avatar

Simply beautiful, Katie. It’s a love story at its core, isn’t it? The violence is chosen, willingly offered and received by two people who care deeply for each other.

Katie Valentine's avatar

Always. Even when it's platonic, it's a lovely story of sorts too. I find kink seems to meet us where we are in the most accepting ways.

T .Vale's avatar

Right from the start, this one felt different. It was slow, comfortable, lived in. This didn’t feel like a fantasy. It was genuine, like it all happened yesterday… and that’s what made me ache. Beautiful!

Vianne Armour's avatar

Yup

Vianne Armour's avatar

🫠🫠

Katie Valentine's avatar

Squeeeeeezed x

T .Vale's avatar

A few lines in I thought, “This is real. This happened.” It dripped from every line.

Katie Valentine's avatar

Well, you're not a million miles away from the truth. I base so much of my writing on fact, I letyself run a little closer to the line this time. And it felt good to experiment with a little more story telling x

Thmsdv's avatar

I felt every sensation in this story. Beautiful x

Katie Valentine's avatar

That was very my intention, so pleased it landed 🖤🩷

Heart Unshackled's avatar

That was world-class prose.

Katie Valentine's avatar

That was a lovely comment, thank you ❤️

Yolanda D.'s avatar

As you head back to bed, he continues where he left off, even while you're dripping wet from your recent shower, but that doesn't faze him.

Katie Valentine's avatar

This lover in this story? Nothing phase him 💦

Yolanda D.'s avatar

I love the way she strolls through the market, thinking of how he has devoured you the night before! You feel his hands all over your soft spots as you pick out daffodils, and the thought drives you mad. As you take your shower, you still feel swollen in all the right places.

Katie Valentine's avatar

Yes! I wanted to punctuate every day things with as much charge as I could. The erotic thread. And tender morning sex that is still a bit rough… yes please

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Katie Valentine's avatar

Thank you darling Richard 🩷